Goethe: The Elvenking (From German)

The audio for this piece is a bit of an experiment. I have digitally modified my voice so that it sounds like 4 people speaking: the narrator, the father, the boy and the Elvenking. The background music is a clip from James Horner's The Ride. 

The Elvenking1
By Johann Wolfgang von Goethe
Translated by A.Z. Foreman
Click hear me recite the German

Who is it now riding, though day is done?
A father, through dark and wind, with his son.
He holds the youngster. His arm is tight
To keep him warm in the cold of the night.

"What's wrong, son? Why are you hiding your eyes?
Look father; can't you see the Elvenking rise?
The Elvenking, all gowned and crowned?"
"My son, it's only fog from the ground"

My dear little child, come away with me.
Our games together- what game's they'll be!
I've gorgeous gardens along the shore.
My mother will cloak you in gold galore.

"O father! My father: oh can you not hear
The promise the Elvenking breathes in my ear?"
"Now, easy my boy. Take it easy there.
It's withered leaves in the windy air. "

So, sweet little boy, will you come my way?
My daughters will wait on you night and day.
My daughters will dance through the night in a ring.
You'll rest as they rock you and sleep as they sing.

"O Father! My father: oh can you not see
His daughters in darkness looking at me?"
"I see it, my son. What I see is the way
The old gray wayside willow trees sway."

I love you! Your beauty is stirring my lust.
And if you're unwilling, I'll take as I must!
"O father! My father! He won't let me go!
Elvenking's holding me, hurting me so!"

The father shudders. He spurs his horse on.
His arm is clasping his moaning son.
Back home under strain and stress he sped,
And there in his arms his son was dead.


1 The coinages Erlkönig and Erlenkönig in German, which actually mean "the king of the alder-trees" are in fact Herder's fortuitous mistranslations of the Danish word ellerkonge: elf king. Erlkönig therefore became associated with trees. In his folksong collection, Herder published his rendering of a Danish ballad in which a knight, riding through the forest is taken by a sprite who introduces herself as "the elf king's daughter." Goethe adopted Herder's hybridized form.

The Original:

Erlkönig

Wer reitet so spät durch Nacht und Wind?
Es ist der Vater mit seinem Kind;
Er hat den Knaben wohl in dem Arm,
Er faßt ihn sicher, er hält ihn warm.

Mein Sohn, was birgst du so bang dein Gesicht?-
Siehst, Vater, du den Erlkönig nicht?
Den Erlenkönig mit Kron und Schweif?-
Mein Sohn, es ist ein Nebelstreif.

"Du liebes Kind, komm, geh mit mir!
Gar schöne Spiele spiel ich mit dir,
Manch bunte Blumen sind an dem Strand,
Meine Mutter hat manch güldne Gewand."

Mein Vater, mein Vater, und hörest du nicht,
Was Erlenkönig mir leise verspricht?-
Sei ruhig, bleibe ruhig, mein Kind;
In dürren Blätern säuselt der Wind.

"Willst, feiner Knabe, du mit mir gehn?
Meine Töchter sollen dich warten schön;
Meine Töchter führen den nächtlichen Reihn,
Und wiegen und tanzen und singen dich ein."

Mein Vater, mein Vater, und siehst du nicht dort
Erlkönigs Töchter am düstern Ort?-
Mein Sohn, mein Sohn, ich seh es genau;
Es scheinen die alten Weiden so grau.

"Ich liebe dich, mich reizt deine schöne Gestalt;
Und bist du nicht willig, so brauch ich Gewalt."-
Mein Vater, mein Vater, jetzt faßt er mich an!
Erlkönig hat mir ein Leids getan!-

Dem Vater grauset's, er reitet geschwind,
Er hält in Armen das ächzende Kind,
Erreicht den Hof mit Mühe und Not;
In seinen Armen das Kind war tot.

2 comments:

  1. Thomas Jesse Vögele WinterJuly 7, 2013 at 3:21 AM

    A really good translation, as good as it is possible to translate poems and texts by Johann Wolfgang von Goethe. But as a German I have to say, it is impossible to translate Goethe, Schiller or Nietzsche with all the beauty and melody in their words and the German language

    But my highest respect for the good work!!! :-)

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